Im writing an essay about myself in Japanese to practice my grammar and such. And I want to know if this sentence sounds natural or not and whether Iam using "特に" "香り" and "な" correctly. And if it does sound unnatural what are some other ways I can better phrase it to sound less forced.

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    Not quite. Hint: Difference between かおり and におい
    – istrasci
    Commented Oct 22, 2019 at 22:45
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    Nonspecific proofreading request is off-topic here. Can you specify which part of this sentence you are uncertain about?
    – naruto
    Commented Oct 23, 2019 at 1:36
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    Is it common to write essays in such a highly colloquial language in your own culture? It definitely is not in the Japanese-speaking world.
    – user4032
    Commented Oct 24, 2019 at 0:19


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