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Is the sentence

私の家族の一人は痩せて、かわいい

a correct translation of

One of my family members is thin and cute

?

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Rather than やせていて, I think ほそくて would be a better description. やせていて almost sounds negative, as in "too thin".

私の家族の一人はほそくてかわいい。

Google ほそくてかわいい and you'll get a bunch of images of thin and cute models and idols.

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  • I did some thinking, and I realized we could slightly alter your phrasing to make the Japanese translation more natural sounding: 私の家族には細くて可愛い人がいる。 It's not the exact same nuance though, so it might not work for you, depending on the intent behind the sentence. – Halfway Dillitante Jan 26 '17 at 0:43
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In this case, "私の家族の一人は" is correct. Although it might feel more natural to specify which one(brother, sister, father, etc...).

However, the following change should be made :

痩せて > 痩せていて

Adding the "いて" is needed to reflect the ongoing state of being thin rather than the plan or the action of loosing weight.

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  • Thank you for your answner but I have a question, what's the point in attaching two te-form verbs ? 痩せて is already reflecting an ongoing state of being thin? isn't it? – Kopurakusu Jan 25 '17 at 15:12
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    @Kopurakusu the second one is the te form of the iru that you add after the first te form to make it ongoing. A te form without the iru after is not ongoing, just a plain te form, that can be used for various things(like chaining up an adjective in this case.) – stack reader Jan 25 '17 at 16:10

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