I want to say:

Tell Paul to send me the letter I wrote for his father.

My attempt is:

パオロさんに それ 父に 書いてあげる 手紙、出してあげると 伝えてください

Is this grammatically correct? How could it be written otherwise?

  • I'm afraid I can get the exact meaning of your English one. It seems to be a somewhat complicated sentence. Can you, for example, write it down in other language you know? Commented Feb 2, 2015 at 19:12
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    @broccoliforest I think it's "Tell Paul to send me the letter I wrote for his father".
    – Earthliŋ
    Commented Mar 3, 2015 at 22:00

2 Answers 2


Almost, but not quite. First of all, it's kind of a strange sentence in English. In Japanese, it is usually possible to omit one or more pieces of information and the meaning will still be clear. In this case, however, there are four different people involved: The speaker, the listener, Paul, and Paul's father. So in order to convey the exact meaning of the English, you will need to specify each of the people.

(Note: I'm not actually sure how "Paul" is most commonly written in katakana. パオロ as you have it makes it sound Italian like "Paolo". In the Bible, the apostle Paul is written as パウロ. And I myself would probably write it as ポール or ポウル. So I'm not sure which is most common, but that's another topic.)

Second, when you say "letter I wrote for his father", do you mean "for" in the sense that his father asked you to write the letter to someone else on his behalf because he couldn't/didn't want to, or that his father is the intended recipient of your letter? For the sake of simplicity, I'm going to assume the latter; if I'm wrong, please comment and I'll change it.

Here's how I'd write the whole sentence:

私がパオロの/その)お父さんに書いた手紙を私に出すように パオロに伝えてください。 → (The letter I wrote to his/Paul's father) (send to me) (him to) ((you) please tell Paul)

Note that you could also put the パオロに at the very beginning.

So you can actually omit the "you" who is the listener, but as you can see, you need to specify that it was I who wrote the letter to his/Paul's father, and Paul needs to be told to send it to me. I think if you leave out any of these, the meaning will not be exactly as you want:

  • If you leave out the わたしが, the writer of the letter is ambiguous
  • If you leave out パオロの/その, then it sounds like the letter was written to the listener's father
  • If you omit the 私に, Paul is simply being told to send the letter (possibly "to his father" would be implied)
  • If you omit the パオロに, it sounds like you want the listener to tell Paul's father to send the letter that you wrote to him (Paul's father), which just doesn't make sense.

Finally, the actual grammatical mistakes are the と and あげるs that you have. The と would be for a "quotation" of words. When you want the listener to tell the third person to do something, you must use ように.

  • パオロに手紙を出す伝えてください → Please tell Paul (the words), "Send the letter".
  • パオロに手紙を出すように伝えてください → Please tell Paul to (do the action of) send(ing) the letter.

You don't need the あげる in 出してあげる because that means you're doing the favour of sending a letter for someone. It would actually be 出してくれる to mean Paul is sending it as a favour for you, but because of the ように I just described, this isn't needed. You don't need the あげる in 書いてあげる unless my assumption at the beginning was incorrect, and you were actually writing the letter as a favour to Paul's father. But even if that were the case, I think there are better ways to say that.

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    [Please tell Paul (the words), "Send the letter"] is パオロに手紙を 出せ と伝えてください.
    – user4092
    Commented Feb 2, 2015 at 10:13
  • @user4092 手紙を 出せ??? Dase is something a bank robber would say! A for effort.
    – sova
    Commented Mar 8, 2015 at 5:44
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    @sova: Plain imperative is required in indirect speech. Insidentally, 手紙を出すと伝えて would be "Tell him that I'll send a letter".
    – user4092
    Commented Mar 8, 2015 at 6:42
  • @user4092 tegami wo kudasai = give me the letter [please]
    – sova
    Commented Mar 8, 2015 at 6:47
  • No no, It's not a problem of indirect speech or something. I've forgot what I was thinking when I wrote it. Anyway, it's fine when the opponent is someone close to you.
    – user4092
    Commented Mar 8, 2015 at 7:22

Yo let's be polite!

When talking about someone else's father you want to use お父さん.

Your own pops is your Chichi 父.

The letter written to Paul's father = Paul (no) Otousan (ni) kaita tegami

"Send it to me please" = [it] (wo) 「watashi (ni) okutte kudasai」

Say all that to Paul = (to) Paul-san (ni) tsutaete kudasai.

パオルさんの お父さんに 書いた手紙を 私に 送ってくださいと パオルさんに 伝えてください。

The letter written for Paul's dad, "send it to me" -- say this to paul please. Or in more natural english "[please] tell paul to send me the letter written for his father"

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