How to express conditional prefernces: "If you like X, I think you will like Y"

Question

I'm trying to say "If you like men in suits, I think you will like the U.K.," but I'm struggling with it.

This is my attempt so far:

「あなたがスーツの男の人が好きであればあなたがイギリスきっと気に入ると思います。」

(1) Is this grammatically correct? If I were only translating the first part of the sentence, I would say 「あなたはスーツの男の人が好きです」, but I was worried that using the topic particle in a conditional construction might apply to the whole sentence, not just the first clause, i.e. I would be saying "You think if..."

(2) Is it kosher to say 「イギリス気に入る」, or do you need to somehow explicitly indicate that you might enjoy being in London?

(3) Is it possible to drop either of the explicit subjects (「あなたが」)? Even if the sentence is grammatically correct, it feels relatively clumsy as is.

On an tangentially related note, is there an idiomatic way to say "under-dressed" in Japanese, as in "I always felt under-dressed in London"?

Thanks in advance for your help!

Answer 1

1. As far as grammar goes, I think it will be correct to say it as:

   あなたがスーツの男の人が好きであれば、あなたはイギリスが/をきっと気に入ると思います。

2. I would say イギリスが気に入る or maybe イギリスを気に入る.

3. Yes, you can drop あなたが/は, as in:

   スーツの男の人が好きであれば、イギリスがきっと気に入ると思います。

   Or a bit more naturally...

   スーツを着た / スーツ姿の男の人が好きなら、きっとイギリスが気に入ると思います(よ)。
   スーツを着た / スーツ姿の男性が好きなら、イギリスはきっと気に入ると思います(よ)。/ きっと気に入りますよ。

For "under-dressed", how about using ラフな(ラフすぎる)服装/[恰好]{かっこう}, カジュアルな(カジュアルすぎる)服装, or maybe [普段着]{ふだんぎ} or [軽装]{けいそう}?

I always felt under-dressed in London.
ロンドンではいつも自分の服装/恰好がラフすぎる/カジュアルすぎる気がしました。